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I am a hideous beast
 covered in dusts of illusions
I came from angels
 but got lost in dark confusions

My sanity was taken
 when I stumbled to my violations
My conscience turned stale
 I forgot the right directions

I am more than an
 ocean of regrets and fears
Drowned by sins that
 learned to love my tears

Perhaps it was anger
 that made me foolishly decide
To blind my eyes
 and let wisdom subside

Maybe it was ephemeral hatred
 that hindered my good reason
Offering me fires of
 painful past to ruminate on

Now the knowledge of this
 story is all that haunts me
Sealing my heart in
 terrors I can never be free


For all that I am
 are dusts of illusions
Who came from angels
 but got lost in dark confusions
I know I have a lot of mistakes...you know what I mean, right?

review, comment and criticize if you have time...thank you!!

Keep writing y'all....
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minninnewah Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really love this stanza:

"For all that I am
are dusts of illusions
Who came from angels
but got lost in dark confusions"

:)
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simple-dedication Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student Writer
Really? :XD: Thank you...... :hug:
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theshadow223 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student Writer
another great piece, I especially loved the lines:
"Now the knowledge of this
story is all that haunts me
Sealing my heart in
terrors I can never be free"
Great job as usual!
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simple-dedication Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student Writer
Those lines are actually the story of my life....thank you for appreciating them.. :D
...and thank you also for the :+fav: ... and your comment? made me smile a lot... :dalove:
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theshadow223 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Writer
I'm glad you share so much of yourself in your pieces, it allows us in and its an amazing amazing thing. (:
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simple-dedication Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student Writer
I'm really happy you made me share my life to you......it scraps out some of the pain knowing people like you exist. :D
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theshadow223 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student Writer
:hug:
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simple-dedication Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student Writer
:tighthug:
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Popskiis Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist
I love the ending of this :D
Very well written!
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simple-dedication Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student Writer
Awwh...Thank you so much...:hug:.....thank you for your comment that made me happy, for the :+fav:, and for the support.... :huggle:
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