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Dream or Wake Up?
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I am fading
Silently slumbering
The pictures now blurry
There's nothing left to see
Sounds seem buzzing
Faces starts clouding
Ideas go disappearing
My mind now dreaming
I want to drift off
I am drifting off
I am floating away
Wanting nothing to say
I can't seem to stop this
Don't want to leave the bliss
I want to stay here
But there's something I fear
My soul is wondering
Yet my brain is staying
The two knights began fighting
The queen started crying
I judge this realm
Must I continue to dream?
Or must I stop?
Stop this and wake up?
Silently slumbering
The pictures now blurry
There's nothing left to see
Sounds seem buzzing
Faces starts clouding
Ideas go disappearing
My mind now dreaming
I want to drift off
I am drifting off
I am floating away
Wanting nothing to say
I can't seem to stop this
Don't want to leave the bliss
I want to stay here
But there's something I fear
My soul is wondering
Yet my brain is staying
The two knights began fighting
The queen started crying
I judge this realm
Must I continue to dream?
Or must I stop?
Stop this and wake up?
.......i have a great school.....but there are just those teachers who bore me with their stake words and all that...i'd rather dream than listen to their cruel banters...i wrote this in school...feeling drowsy and hurt at the same time...it's not that good..so you can pinpoint the mistakes........thanks!
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Hmm.. i know how you feel, i too am told to stop dreaming, yet i dont know how..
like you wrote, im lost in this dream world..
when people tell me to get out, even their word seem like their not even real
Also the world is cruel, and to survive you often have to switch or your mind from this world.. and step into a better one, that doesnt really exist, just to shield yourself..
But im afraid i've gone to far, and now im floating from this world, so caught in my mind that im detached from it.. anyway sorry for the big comment xD great peom, happy you posted it
Keep writing..
like you wrote, im lost in this dream world..
when people tell me to get out, even their word seem like their not even real
Also the world is cruel, and to survive you often have to switch or your mind from this world.. and step into a better one, that doesnt really exist, just to shield yourself..
But im afraid i've gone to far, and now im floating from this world, so caught in my mind that im detached from it.. anyway sorry for the big comment xD great peom, happy you posted it
Keep writing..